Treasure Chest

Memories tucked away for safe keeping!

 

Minute by minute memories are made.

Day by day they are tucked away for safekeeping,

in the treasure chest of hearts.

Author's Note

Hope you like it, tell what you think! I can delete it!

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Sweet and to the point..!!!

[Jim Parson]

This is short and sweet and says a lot in such a few words. It gives such a warm feeling. But I would love to see you use this idea to build a longer poem of all the memories held in that treasure chest.

[Jibey]

Don't delete it... It has a pleasing charm about it.

(Memories - not memoryies)

[Im His Daughter]

beautiful... you can possibly fix the y in memories & remove your i can delete comment too ... its a keeper :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You definitely have a quotable here.
You are not eternal.

[SpokenWord]

We have to keep you away from your delete button. Not all my memories are tucked away I tried to forget some of them :)

[Deviant Works]

I absolutely agree.:) I love your short poems, Imagination. You have a WONDERFUL ability to make a point, to touch on endearing thoughts/emotions that many readers can understand with only writing just a few lines. Perhaps power is not in the amount of words, but in the message that is given. And you always have truly inspirational messages, a beautiful view of life. I agree with everyone, deleting is out of the question.:) This is much to uplifting and should be shared don't you think.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Why would you delete this? I like it and it speaks volumes. Beautiful sentiments.

Chloe

[Judy Ponceby]

I love this!!! :) What do you think of making it "memories are made" since you used "THEY are tucked away"? And I have developed this thing about commas personally, and I don't think you need it after "keeping" because it breaks the flow. Just my thoughts :) This is a beauty, Never delete it! treasure chest of hearts is just a lovely image :)

[xjust-for-me.x]

it is the short poems that have the most feeling in them..dont delete this it is a very good poem.