Treasure Chest

Memories tucked away for safe keeping!

 

Minute by minute memories are made.

Day by day they are tucked away for safekeeping,

in the treasure chest of hearts.

Author's Note

Hope you like it, tell what you think! I can delete it!

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

I love this. So to the point and every word is so evocative in its placement

[A. Fischer]

Makes me think of my children! Thanks for sharing! :)

[michael]

Oh, please don't delete it. I am a lover of 'greatly said but leastly worded'.
A wonderful 'treasure'.

[Shardbearer99]

Short, simple, and very effective. Each day brings to use new memories to create, new people to meet and start friendships with. Memories are something to hold close to your heart, to cherish. My memories will always be of my Gran; I miss her very much. But this was a lovely little poem. Thank you for sharing this

[Jeff]

Great read!

[Mauricio Montoya]

is that where the saying came from : get this off my chest.
Nice work.

[Jenny Nelson]

Don't delete it. It's quite lovely. Very pleasant to read.

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautiful metaphor of our lives... all of us hiding away those special treasures... some only gold and silver to us, but precious nonetheless. Loved this vivid glimpse inside us all.

[Liza]

oh the treasure is our chest - the heart of matters - nice