Her Everlasting

She longs to find her special love.

 

She sats on the sultry beach day dreaming.

The cool salty water dampen her skin as the

water explode into waves.

She's tired of being alone.

Where is her prince charming?

 

She fantasize plunging deep into the ocean surface,

swiming as a mermaid.

Becoming Arial and finding Eric her human prince.

Her eyes closed she sees it all playing out in her mind.

Her everlasting comes true.

 

Where is her fairy godmother?

If only she would appear and place her in

the most elegant gown.

Her prince would take her into his embrace,

glide her around the room.

The other girls would look on with envy.

As he become her everlasting love.

 

She's being held in a masion with a beast.

He's cruel, but yet there's something

intriguing about him.

She's his beauty.

He's her beast.

She falls in love with him,

he with her.

They kiss and he became human,

the spell is broken.

Happy everlasting magically happens.

 

She brings herself back to reality.

Standing up on a rock she looks out toward

sea one last time.

Her prince no where in sight she turn to leave.

Her foot slips and she falls into strong arms.

Gazing up into blue eyes her voice fails her.

Gently he puts her down.

They stare into each others eyes.

Her fairy tale prince she puts to rest in hopes

that her everlasting has appeared.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I was thinking about fairy tale love and came up with this poem!

Tell what you think!

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This reminds me of Tuck Everlasting....lovely write!

[Jibey]

I guess we all love to dream.. and to make our fantasies seem real... Here you seem to move between reality and fantasy, expressing a longing fir the unreachable but hoping that it might just be true... The good structure of the poem helps to guive it some backbone...

[Stef Outsiders]

I like this, you've written it well and saw beauty and the beast, with the little mermaid. I love a good fairy tale but there only dreams, very rarely do people have a fairy like that...
great write though...

[Jenny Nelson]

Nicely done. Seems like folks get reality and fantasy mixed up quite often, but there's certainly no reason to believe that a fairy tale ending can't happen in reality once in awhile. Nice thoughts; well stated. Nice piece!

[KAREN]

I really like it!
Each line of the poem took me into a fairy tale book!
I loved the ending by the way! It sounded like she may have found her everlasting!!

[An owl on the moon]

You take us from the fairy tale to the beauty of reality when a dreamer awakens. Beautiful and joyful ending that is full of magic!

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Rather enchanting :)

[xjust-for-me.x]

Excellent