Her Everlasting

She longs to find her special love.

 

She sats on the sultry beach day dreaming.

The cool salty water dampen her skin as the

water explode into waves.

She's tired of being alone.

Where is her prince charming?

 

She fantasize plunging deep into the ocean surface,

swiming as a mermaid.

Becoming Arial and finding Eric her human prince.

Her eyes closed she sees it all playing out in her mind.

Her everlasting comes true.

 

Where is her fairy godmother?

If only she would appear and place her in

the most elegant gown.

Her prince would take her into his embrace,

glide her around the room.

The other girls would look on with envy.

As he become her everlasting love.

 

She's being held in a masion with a beast.

He's cruel, but yet there's something

intriguing about him.

She's his beauty.

He's her beast.

She falls in love with him,

he with her.

They kiss and he became human,

the spell is broken.

Happy everlasting magically happens.

 

She brings herself back to reality.

Standing up on a rock she looks out toward

sea one last time.

Her prince no where in sight she turn to leave.

Her foot slips and she falls into strong arms.

Gazing up into blue eyes her voice fails her.

Gently he puts her down.

They stare into each others eyes.

Her fairy tale prince she puts to rest in hopes

that her everlasting has appeared.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I was thinking about fairy tale love and came up with this poem!

Tell what you think!

Reviews

[iamkim]

wow! this is so cute :) very beautiful! i love it! fairy tale in real life also do com true :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wonderful Work..!!

[Cynthia]

I really love fairy tales love, cause its all.. so dreamy and bring us back to the world without stress and pressure! Fairies tales are all lovely, cause its not real, it gives us a space to go out of things we don't like!
I love this poem, the girl MUST be so lucky at the very end she found her love! Not just a dream, but real! How I hope this will occurs in reality.. its so rare to have a fairy tale love...

[Deviant Works]

I simply love fairytale love! I was honestly just thinking about Arial and Eric. How she saves him from the sea, singing her beautiful melody as he comes awake. I truly believe that some of the tales of love, like in the stories you have mentioned, are the best. I love how you brought this piece back to reality but ended it sweetly, romantically. The man catching her with strong arms. A happily ever after.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the details about the beach that you have painted here. I believe everyone has a fairytale just that not all of them have happy endings. I have felt like this a time or two in my life. I think everyone does at some point.

[SpokenWord]

This is really good with a look at fairy tales we all learned about with an ending that is a new fairy tale come to life upon a wish. Beautiful work.

[Linear]

Ah fairy tale castles in the air, oh how I wish I were there, knights on white steeds, princesses in towers that need rescuing, firery dragons and excaliber..... Loved it

[Ladysue]

ah good ending...a beautiful and well told tale..nicely done

[Jeff]

Great write! It's nice to escape reality for a time being.

[Coyote Poetry]

Those modern day fairy tale rarely do happen. I like the story in the poem. Many nursery rhymes create a very good ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote