Sleeping Beauty

 

Torrential happiness rains down on him.

Desire strickens his being.

He stares at his wife.

Her sandy brown hair feathered out on her pillow,

he lifts a strand from her face while she's sleeping.

The scent of her strawberry shampoo tickles his nostrils.

He drinks in her beauty.

 

Light blue eyes as vibrant as a setting sun

lowering into the horizon is breath-taking.

He could stare into those eyes of beauty that twinkle with radiant light and laughter  and get lost forever.

 

Her bare tanned skin is aglow and silky to his touch.

Sultry lips so delectable and enticing,

he wants to taste them.

Her harmonious voice is music to his ears.

A warm sensation blankets him as he watches her sleep.

 

He glides his hand down her long sexy legs.

Pure ecstasy unravels his senses as her feminined

body rubs up against him.

His breathing becomes rapid.

 

In the dawn of light he watches her sleep.

Her exquisite features all innocent and peaceful.

His heart swells with love for his sleeping beauty.

Reviews

[JLEE5879]

Very romantic and descriptive.

[Liza]

the contrast of appreciation stated through tension and longing - a nice build up and release

[Morning Star]

Beautiful Fill with passion and tenderness
sensual,beautifully written and executed truly a
Sophisticated sensual dance
Brilliant piece

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this is very descripive
I like it :)

[A]

Amazingly romantic, deeply heart-felt and easily visualized due to an excellent description and flow, great poem

[Jim Parson]

This is really beautiful, warm and enticing. Once again, you've captured the moment perfectly. It's as if you were watching me as I watched her sleep, as I do every night.

(A couple of typos to correct...harmonious, ecstasy, exquisite)

[Jeff]

Wonderful job. The imagery in this piece is brilliant.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Not only have you captured the emotion with your words but I can also visualize sleeping beauty in detail like a work of art.
Excellent write

[Shardbearer99]

You're a lovely writer than can weave sentences together intimately. Beautiful poetry

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tender sensuality expressed here, as the man lovingly looks to his darling... That sense of passion stirring in his mind as she sleeps. Beautifully whispered...