Sleeping Beauty

 

Torrential happiness rains down on him.

Desire strickens his being.

He stares at his wife.

Her sandy brown hair feathered out on her pillow,

he lifts a strand from her face while she's sleeping.

The scent of her strawberry shampoo tickles his nostrils.

He drinks in her beauty.

 

Light blue eyes as vibrant as a setting sun

lowering into the horizon is breath-taking.

He could stare into those eyes of beauty that twinkle with radiant light and laughter  and get lost forever.

 

Her bare tanned skin is aglow and silky to his touch.

Sultry lips so delectable and enticing,

he wants to taste them.

Her harmonious voice is music to his ears.

A warm sensation blankets him as he watches her sleep.

 

He glides his hand down her long sexy legs.

Pure ecstasy unravels his senses as her feminined

body rubs up against him.

His breathing becomes rapid.

 

In the dawn of light he watches her sleep.

Her exquisite features all innocent and peaceful.

His heart swells with love for his sleeping beauty.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Such a way to admire her while she sleeps innocently and yet she still stirs him to passions so easily. Wonderful write of observation and love. I enjoyed the descriptions the way his eyes viewed her, his nose loved her and fingers adored her. Excellent.

[Loner]

Awesome write !

[Angela]

Quite beautiful.

[A. Fischer]

Lovely.

[xjust-for-me.x]

oh love the words and the vision that is told in your words.

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet and sexy poem. He's so in love with her.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

beautiful poem, Very romantic and sexy. It flows greatly together, Wonderful work.

[pheasant]

dreamy expose on one man's fixation on his sensational object of desire
a few things i didn't understand... how he was seeing her eyes while she was sleeping... and crimson(reddish) eyes?... also at the end why were her exquisite features bitter sweet?
i think you've used a lot of excellent wording here, but perhaps a few which may not necessarily apply in the situation
overall i enjoyed it and was pleasing to the ear, not necessarily to the logical mind
keep it up

[Kimberly]

Sexy! Very nice I love it.

[Quinn Blackburn]

sensual, evocative, alluring... well done!