The Seed

A seed of love planted in someone's heart, starts to grow.

 

A seed of love planted in the depth of my heart.

I prayed,

I hoped

it would flourish and grow.

The feeling it gave me was fuzzy and warm.

Emotions I've never imagined crowded my being,

overwhelming me with tears and joy.

I never wanted the seed to get tangled in weeds and die.

I wanted to feel the delicate seed grow,

and push through the surface of my heart.

I explored,

I matured,

I waited,

until my heart blossomed with love and so much more.

 

Author's Note

Just a short poem I came up with, hope you like!

Tell what you think.

Reviews

[Karli]

Gosh, I wish I could get emotions into writing this way. It's so simple, yet so powerful in it's own way. Very sentimental, and heart-warming:)

[xjust-for-me.x]

lovely poem..enjoyed very much

[Dream Weaver]

Wow, your text kinda looks like a flower in bloom.
Lovely sentiments to this beautiful poem...

[Jenny Nelson]

Quite the uplifting piece. Well said, great metaphors and description. Very lovely and enjoyable.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wonderful and beautiful poem. This is a great write! I love this piece

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you used the seed to describe love growing. Like a garden love needs to be tended to or it will fade and die over time. The sentiment in this poem is clearly show and the flow is easy to follow.

[Stef Outsiders]

Aw this is sweet and cute, i like the format, for some reason the way you have written this poem it has formed a picture of a tree... or that just could be me! lol
but good job though!

[cfix]

wonderful imagery and a beautiful write

[Jim Parson]

This was really very sweet and touching. A beautiful thought brought to fruition with beautiful words.

[Poeticadia]

A beautiful image! I love the shape of the poem too.