The Musical

Birds singing their own music.

 

Birds sing a melodic ballad

while cascading the blue sky.

Twirling and singing while

bringing a beautiful sight.

Author's Note

Something different I wanted to try, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[OT]

very nice!!! very serene and tranquil, the idea of birds "cascading" around the sky - a peaceful image!

[E.H. Monroe]

This is what I should put in my ceiling when I wake up to remind myself that life is not that bad.

Excellent wuick piece full of happy

[Jeff]

I like it. It's very light-hearted and has great imagery!

[InkSlinger]

Light and delightful imagery.. Sweet little tweet.

[Kate Hunter]

nice job.

[xjust-for-me.x]

very nice has a lilt to it. like it very much.

[Brad]

the energy and flow of this rips through the darkness and pulls the light with it...thank you

[Karli]

really nice imagery, and short and sweet:)

[A. Fischer]

Nice imagery!

thanks for sharing

[Kelley]

Ok I just read your sisters poem
but I think this one is a little better.
Sorry but its true....smiles