The Musical

Birds singing their own music.

 

Birds sing a melodic ballad

while cascading the blue sky.

Twirling and singing while

bringing a beautiful sight.

Author's Note

Something different I wanted to try, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete poem in so few words. That takes great talent. I need a day when the birds are singing and Spring is near. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

I love this, I can just see birds doing just what you've written about! Very joyful.

[G. K. Bostic]

A lovely image. :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Cute and sweet. Great one!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Birds in flight, yes it is a beautiful sight. Singing in unison.
Nice work.

[SilentLullabies]

It is very warm and happy. Exactly what someone sad needs to read to brighten up their day

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a dance of music and color, drifting through your blue sky. I can sense spring in your song!

[Robin]

a wonderful image and movement cast upon the imagination

[CompellingComposer]

A nice poem. Short, sweet, and to the point. I love it! Good job, keep writing!
-C.C.

[DeViouS]

Speaks to me of a warm Summer day standing in the field and watching the skylarks. Lovely.