Unending Love

A wife states her love to her husband!

You tenderly say my name.

I hear the love in your voice,

so divine and musical to my ears.

I come to you with open arms.

We melt into each others embrace.

 

You're like the morning sunlight that brightens my life.

My path glows so I won't stumble.

Your hands are like the rays, wrapping me in warmth.

Softly and tenderly you hold me.

You set my soul afire.

 

The joy that I have is because of you.

You're the sweetest man I know.

Our hearts are in tune with each other.

You're the author and creator of my happiness.

 

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.

Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.

Fueling desire burns within us.

Make boundless love to me.

 

I'll keep my eyes upon you, never let them waver.

My trust and commitment is in you.

I'll proclaim my immortal love to you forever.

Let us share our life together as we journey our destiny.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy! please let me know.

Reviews

[underwriter]

wow, i think i need to get a bucket of water to extinquish that fire!! wow! beautifully and tastefully done, and WHAT an expression of love and devotion!!
"Our hearts are in tune with each other.
You're the author and creator of my happiness.

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.
Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.
Fueling desire burns within us.
Make boundless love to me."

simply beautiful! just....WOW! this one is going into my favorites!!!

[Honey]

can i give you a challenge?
i dare you to write a poem not about love, or lovers, or anything even SLIGHTLY related to it
youre not allowed to write a poem about the seasons either
ill let you think about what to write now
ps, nice imagery

[Tina Kline]

I did enjoy your poem. This is very romantic, expressing how the other person is so important to you, they are your life. Great job on this. It reads smoothly and easily and that's very important in enjoying a poem to its fullest.

[Coyote Poetry]

Few times in a life. We will give everything. I like the emotion and desire of this poem. The description of happiness and thankfulness is alive and strong. I like the positive ending. A outstanding poem. Love should be as in your words.
"My trust and commitment is in you.
I'll proclaim my immortal love to you forever."
Thank you.
Coyote

[InkSlinger]

I think one could say... YOU HIT THE BIG TIME... super work!!, and you are becoming a fine writer.. improving each and every time I read something new from you..

[Linear]

I think maybe with such a love, such a show of emotion mixed in tender loving devotion, we can all reach out for such a love as chaste as this.

[Stef Outsiders]

passionate, devotion, love, desire... the list can go on! perfect piece, i could see the wife say this to her husband and then fall into each others arms afterwards! stunning!

[xjust-for-me.x]

Wow is all i can say..this is very good..your words take us beyound the bountries of the words.

[OT]

a very strong love poem here!! the passionate love that can't be tamed - and you've done it tastefully without diverging into erotica which it could have easily been haha a nice poem!!

[Dream Weaver]

This is simply ravishing, such emotive potency I can feel the
warmth from within...

[Cherrie Palmer]

this is soft, warm and lovly