Unending Love

A wife states her love to her husband!

You tenderly say my name.

I hear the love in your voice,

so divine and musical to my ears.

I come to you with open arms.

We melt into each others embrace.

 

You're like the morning sunlight that brightens my life.

My path glows so I won't stumble.

Your hands are like the rays, wrapping me in warmth.

Softly and tenderly you hold me.

You set my soul afire.

 

The joy that I have is because of you.

You're the sweetest man I know.

Our hearts are in tune with each other.

You're the author and creator of my happiness.

 

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.

Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.

Fueling desire burns within us.

Make boundless love to me.

 

I'll keep my eyes upon you, never let them waver.

My trust and commitment is in you.

I'll proclaim my immortal love to you forever.

Let us share our life together as we journey our destiny.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy! please let me know.

Reviews

[underwriter]

wow, i think i need to get a bucket of water to extinquish that fire!! wow! beautifully and tastefully done, and WHAT an expression of love and devotion!!
"Our hearts are in tune with each other.
You're the author and creator of my happiness.

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.
Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.
Fueling desire burns within us.
Make boundless love to me."

simply beautiful! just....WOW! this one is going into my favorites!!!

[E.H. Monroe]

"You're the author and creator of my happiness."

As always the piece speaks volumes of love and understanding that love which you do so well.

But this one line, giving someone that lisence and planting that title on them is more than I can ever give to anyone. I have tried and lost. You have, and have found.

Good on ya, and enjoy it

Another excellent job

[steph]

Once again another Excellent poem.. Sometimes I wish I could write like that.. I love the discription

[DeViouS]

What a tender, sweet loving picture! Shame it can't last when we get to the practicalities of life.

[Jim Parson]

This is beautiful, oh imaginative one!

[Ladysue]

Beautiful expression. heartfelt and tender...nicely done...