Unending Love

A wife states her love to her husband!

You tenderly say my name.

I hear the love in your voice,

so divine and musical to my ears.

I come to you with open arms.

We melt into each others embrace.

 

You're like the morning sunlight that brightens my life.

My path glows so I won't stumble.

Your hands are like the rays, wrapping me in warmth.

Softly and tenderly you hold me.

You set my soul afire.

 

The joy that I have is because of you.

You're the sweetest man I know.

Our hearts are in tune with each other.

You're the author and creator of my happiness.

 

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.

Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.

Fueling desire burns within us.

Make boundless love to me.

 

I'll keep my eyes upon you, never let them waver.

My trust and commitment is in you.

I'll proclaim my immortal love to you forever.

Let us share our life together as we journey our destiny.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy! please let me know.

Reviews

[underwriter]

wow, i think i need to get a bucket of water to extinquish that fire!! wow! beautifully and tastefully done, and WHAT an expression of love and devotion!!
"Our hearts are in tune with each other.
You're the author and creator of my happiness.

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.
Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.
Fueling desire burns within us.
Make boundless love to me."

simply beautiful! just....WOW! this one is going into my favorites!!!

[Deviant Works]

This filled my heart with such happiness. To know that there is so much love and devotion in this world brings warmth to my life. Forever cherish what is given and never hesitate to share. A beautiful poem, as usual Imagination. This piece has set my mood for the day. Thank you very much.:)

[deeps]

This is ever so beatuful, I really like this.

[Poeticadia]

"soft and tender" and very loving. Very pleasurable to read.

[Kelley]

This was beautiful and you could feel the love when you read it.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Marie Harrison]

Hope to have that kind of marriage one day. Lovely!

[Nothing Personal]

Yah it's sweet, beautiful and kind of a marriage vow ( genuinely meant). I am a patron of romance , So I definitely liked this :-) Great write..

[Cynthia]

what a beautiful poem! The last line is like a promise of loving her husband forever! Great!

[Valentine]

A very passionate write, if only all who loved felt this way on both sides..Valentine

[Jeffrey Gershom]

That is a beautiful poem! The love is so infused in the words, line after line, stanza after stanza. Your husband is very lucky to have such a passionate wife.
Excellent poem.
-Jeffrey

[G. K. Bostic]

Lovely words of boundless love. Really good job with this!