Unending Love

A wife states her love to her husband!

You tenderly say my name.

I hear the love in your voice,

so divine and musical to my ears.

I come to you with open arms.

We melt into each others embrace.

 

You're like the morning sunlight that brightens my life.

My path glows so I won't stumble.

Your hands are like the rays, wrapping me in warmth.

Softly and tenderly you hold me.

You set my soul afire.

 

The joy that I have is because of you.

You're the sweetest man I know.

Our hearts are in tune with each other.

You're the author and creator of my happiness.

 

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.

Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.

Fueling desire burns within us.

Make boundless love to me.

 

I'll keep my eyes upon you, never let them waver.

My trust and commitment is in you.

I'll proclaim my immortal love to you forever.

Let us share our life together as we journey our destiny.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy! please let me know.

Reviews

[underwriter]

wow, i think i need to get a bucket of water to extinquish that fire!! wow! beautifully and tastefully done, and WHAT an expression of love and devotion!!
"Our hearts are in tune with each other.
You're the author and creator of my happiness.

Our love has never been weak, it excels beyond our control.
Overflowing passion blankets our bodies.
Fueling desire burns within us.
Make boundless love to me."

simply beautiful! just....WOW! this one is going into my favorites!!!

[Loner]

Really enjoyed it from the start and till the end.... romantic write ..

[littlelilypurplebride]

this is so beauiful sweet pure love how it should be i love, love it is such a beautiful thing. god bless lily great write going to m reading list

[Ashley June Canfield]

so fresh, I like this (:

[Kimberly]

This could be written by me about my own darling husband. Great write.

[Ron]

Love this poem. To see a woman opening her heart so unconditionally is worthy of a good perusal. It leaves her vulnerable to the man who lies, who is frightened off by this depth of love and the giggilo! One waits for the sequel when reality dawns. The reader wishes her love will last forever but senses disaster around the corner!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful devotion, amazingly put into words... :)

[JLEE5879]

Great work! I really enjoyed it.

[Jeff]

Wonderful poem! A great story you've told here!

[Always&Forever]

this is great!

[Liza]

you definitely should be in the greeting card business....this could be an anniversary card...well maybe too hot for hallmark with the passionate blanket bodies :) but i loved it.