Seven days Of Romance

A wife feels unloved, her husband helps them find romance once again!

 

Love, kisses, candy, flowers he once gave her,

but now there far and between.

She feels so unloved, forgotten.

Where did the romance go?

She still needs it in her life.

 

Monday....

Classical music played softly.

Fire crackled in the fireplace.

Champagne glasses clinged together.

Vows were retold to one another.

Her heart beat accelerated.

 

Tuesday....

He escorted her to dinner and a movie.

In the darken theater they made out like high

school sweet hearts.

She felt timid.

 

Wednesday....

Flowers and a card were bought.

She smiled.

The card played You Are So Beautiful to Me,

he sung along.

She cried.

 

Thursday....

Breakfast was given to her in bed.

The toast was burnt.

Eggs were scorched.

She ate every bite.

She was so in love with him.

 

Friday....

He slipped a diamond bracelet on her arm.

Her eyes twinkle as bright as the diamonds.

She was ecstatic.

 

Saturday....

The day was spent talking, reminiscing about old times.

Passionate love was made that night.

She was enchanted.

 

Sunday....

He spoke the words that she long to hear,

"I love you."

She looked him in the eyes,

and whispered, "I love you too."

 

Her heart had been jumped started, replenished.

She felt full, loved, and happy.

The seven days  of romance she would cherish

forever and always.

 

 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think! Thank You

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Everyone needs to be reminded from time to time that they are still special and still loved. Weather it be seven days like in this poem or just a card with a note written it, it can recapture the heart. The flow of this poem is easy to follow and this is a topic that almost every woman can relate to and most me can as well but me want different things. lol Great write that reminds us to let people in our lives know just how much we love them and need them in our lives.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the wisdom in the poem. We forget to appreciate our number two. Without our wife/husband we would be alone and empty. You logic in the seven steps is correct and need to be used when necessary. I like the positive ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Blissful poem. Very charming. Loved the detail of the burnt toast. Ha!

[Cynthia]

Awwwww, thats so romantic! What a nice write you write! Ha, sounds like a plan of loving another one to me:D I hope I got to have a week like that as well ;D A Very nice written love story.

[SOUL LESS]

This is so perfectly lovely...nice job!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the magikal seven~lovely movements~

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, i wish i would have thought of this concept, what was your inspiration for this one? i love how on sunday he says i love you to her, its like a completion. so romantic!

[Linear]

Ah seven days of bliss, you wrote it so well, bravo

[steph]

Seven days can seem like an eternity when romance is involved. the way two lovers make promises, the way they hold each other, it's like the only thing in the world that matters is them. I believer you captured the essence of that perfectly. You did an excellent job !!!! Makes me want to go out and have another romance. but alas. I am just a hopeless romantic... Thank you for the journey....

[Stef Outsiders]

Aw i wish my week was like that! beautiful piece!