Take Me

Spending time with the one you love.

 

Take me,

by the hand and let's walk in the moon lit night,

underneath the starry sky

we'll reminisce about old times,

when our lives were young and carefree

our love was  blissfull

 

Take me,

back to a time when life was  simple,

nothing mattered but you and I

when our love was  strong,

together, we are stronger now

we've grown so much

 

Take me,

back to that place, where we married

 reliving the passion we shared

staring into each others eyes, getting lost for hours on end

 

Take me,

into your embrace

hold me

love me

kiss me

 

Take me,

never let me go

wrapped in each others hearts forever

dream our lives, and live our dreams

just you and me

Author's Note

Just something romantic I came up with, hope you like it.

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I really do like it. It is romantic and rather peaceful and tender too. It gives very positive feelings.

[Jibey]

It IS romantic - full of loving delight... a kind of candyfloss reverie... but can we ever go back and re-capture those moments? What is nice is the longing expressed in the 'take me' - the sense of hope...

[Goodbye]

Oh this is so rich with a life shared together, so romantic and filled with a depth of love...

Very, very lovely poem!

[Marie Harrison]

Love this romantic write. Lucky you to have your own secluded island. I'm jealous! Fabulous job.

[Loner]

I am speechless such thoughts so beautifully portrayed i am amazed !
i am shelfing this one too .... cannot resist.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and emotion. We need to whisper those words. "Take me." I like this poem. Two people need time alone to celebrate each other. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

Nice...

love is ever such an emotional ride...

[Dream Weaver]

I'll skip the few grammar errs because the poem is really
beautiful...well done :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

really sweet poetic streaming~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I think you have the makings of a beautiful song.