Take Me

Spending time with the one you love.

 

Take me,

by the hand and let's walk in the moon lit night,

underneath the starry sky

we'll reminisce about old times,

when our lives were young and carefree

our love was  blissfull

 

Take me,

back to a time when life was  simple,

nothing mattered but you and I

when our love was  strong,

together, we are stronger now

we've grown so much

 

Take me,

back to that place, where we married

 reliving the passion we shared

staring into each others eyes, getting lost for hours on end

 

Take me,

into your embrace

hold me

love me

kiss me

 

Take me,

never let me go

wrapped in each others hearts forever

dream our lives, and live our dreams

just you and me

Author's Note

Just something romantic I came up with, hope you like it.

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[steph]

Very passionate, very sweet ... I Love it

[Bette]

very sweet

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job in puting this together.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I think this is lovely. Its beauty is in its honest simplicity and direct plea, I really enjoyed it.

[Linear]

I shall tell you what I think,

It's beautiful and well written, it express's what love can be, for both the young and old

[Isha Ethera]

its lovely!

[Ron]

Very good evocative work. I still cannot warm to the modern mode of writing without punctuation! Look forward to the sequel when she wants rid of him!

[Dream Slave]

Very loving and sweet piece. When two souls plant their seeds on one another, and they grow into strong, tall, healthy trees, it is a very very intense and beautiful feeling. Words cannot describe what I felt when I read this... priceless piece of work.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tenderness here.. looking back over the years.. holding on to those memories, yet wanting to make new ones to revive all that you've shared. Beautiful and loving.