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A POEM ABOUT A PERSON TRYING TO FIND THEMSELVES!

I was born into this world.

But why?

What is my purpose?

 

The world is so huge,

that I feel lost at times.

I'm trying to find my place.

Where do I belong?

Where do I search for me?

 

I look deep inside myself,

only to see my flaws.

What do others see?

My triumphs?

Do I have any?

Does it matter to me what they see?

It shouldn't, but it does!

 

I was born into this world.

But why?

What is my purpose?

 

It is to be loved and to suceed!

Will I suceed?

Yes, I will keep searching

in this big world

for me until I suceed!

Author's Note

This poem came to me today! hope you like it!

Reviews

[Bette]

well done

[Jeff]

We've all pondered this question many times.

[Desert Dreamer]

We may see parts of ourselves reflected in others and in the world, but truly we can only find ourselves by looking inside. I think we all ask these questions at some time in our life.

[Wondering Mind]

Not so uncommon inner thoughts, and BIG question. It's good that you found parts of an answer.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i agree, these are questions that many of us ask ourselves on a daily basis. great representation of the subject though, i really like it.

[InkSlinger]

Ah the question that we all ask ourselves.. why are we here?.. If you keep writing, we will have the answer soon enough. You have great potential!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is one question that many ask all the time. I have come to the conclusion I don't know exactly what I am suppose to do in the this life this world but I am making my way. If we knew the answer to why we are here it would take the adventure out of life and out of discovering things we like and don't like along the way. Hang in there. this is a great poem posing a question that we all ask. I can tell you this much you are a creative writer. Look deep inside yourself. You will find your likes and dislikes. Maybe your destine to be a write? I don't know but it couldn't hurt to try right?