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A POEM ABOUT A PERSON TRYING TO FIND THEMSELVES!

I was born into this world.

But why?

What is my purpose?

 

The world is so huge,

that I feel lost at times.

I'm trying to find my place.

Where do I belong?

Where do I search for me?

 

I look deep inside myself,

only to see my flaws.

What do others see?

My triumphs?

Do I have any?

Does it matter to me what they see?

It shouldn't, but it does!

 

I was born into this world.

But why?

What is my purpose?

 

It is to be loved and to suceed!

Will I suceed?

Yes, I will keep searching

in this big world

for me until I suceed!

Author's Note

This poem came to me today! hope you like it!

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

While I had a little idle mind time last night I just had to answer this.....

Succeed you do. Succeed you will
Your birth is your purpose
To live and love searching for answers still
In a world full of questions
You belong at the top of your hill
And if you really look deep
Into the you that the doubt can kill
The triumphs are answers
Like grains of truth that will mill
Chemicals of success compounding
A cure as easy as taking a pill
Understanding that self is not them
They have their own prescription to fill
So as you spin with a world
Use that momentum trying to spill
Your confidence off the edge
Living loving thoughts that will chill
The heat of uncertainty
With the ink of your pen, and your spirited will!

Or so says the poet Bill

Billigami

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Bill, I love it!

[Worms]

YAY I'm not the only one

but seriously very nice work on your dialouge and great topic choice something we can all relate to

[Mauricio Montoya]

We all at one time ask ourselves that question and some of us spend our whole life seeking the answer. Thank you for sharing.

[SpokenWord]

I feel we all want our lives to have some type purpose, a reason. I feel that way but I know our true purpose is to make our own purpose. It would be easier if life was a script maybe like a movie but having free will dispels that myth and we are the true creators of our own purpose on this earth. A spur of the moment poem that is rich in thought and contemplation

[Stef Outsiders]

Most of those questions i ask myself everyday... apart from the succeeded part lol
but another good write! your good...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nice write hun..

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very hopeful while wandering and wondering att he same time. I can empathize with these feelings well expressed. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Cherrie Palmer]

a poem without gender or age the search for one's place and purpose, nicely penned into a poem :)

[Goodbye]

Very cool, very affirmative!