Death

A short poem about feelings of death!

 

 

 

Death is coming

are you ready?

Some welcome it.

Others fear it.

Most prepare for it.

Death is coming

are you ready?

Author's Note

THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT WRITING A POEM! I HOPE IT IS WORTH PUBLISHING IF NOT, I'LL HIT THE DELET BUTTON! LET ME KNOW!

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i will never be ready for death.. i write alot about death but its more of a curioustity to me and a huge fear i have of it.. but i like this

[Deviant Works]

I like this. Reminded me of something I just wrote. Very good.

[Desert Dreamer]

Whether we are ready or not, death is in our future. A message for all of us to ponder.

[serpent]

powerful...powerful indeed... alot of thought and insight being put into it...
its amazing how your first write has so much to say in a few words...
delete that delete button, dear poet... its a crime to touch a wonderful write like this with that button...

[Lucy Brenda Booker Rope..]

I really like this poem.

[Calypso]

This short, but powerful poem get to the point. Personally I'm not afraid of death, because like you said it will happen to everyone.

[An owl on the moon]

You confess a profound truth that awakens the reader's heart and mind to our fragility. May we find a deeper meaning and value to this day that we all have to share.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wonderful write.

[Goodbye]

Now my imaginative one, be gentle with yourself. Trust me, nobody is perfect when starting out, and I don't know about anyone else, but I'm quite sure not everything I write is a pearl of wisdom.

This is a very good first effort, and you better keep writing poetry!

[Wondering Mind]

solid write..like a brick on the head (a good brick on the head)