Nature's Color Wheel Spins in Kaleidoscopic Days

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Raspberry wine enriches the horizon

As the lemon meringue sun drinks in

champagne hues

White marshmellow clouds deviate the

prismantic sky

 

Lucky charm rainbow arches prominently,

Sips on kool aid colors of spring

Porcelain rays sparkle in dimensional waves

Wind lets off a semitone breath of fresh

peppermint air

 

Chromantic flowers entwine in a color

scheme of mountain dew perfume

Tinges of yellow magically appear in a

skittle filled sky

Copper tone residue paints a fashion style

 

The grass is tinted with emerald and olive

green complexion

Birds sing in a jubilant ballad

Early morning canvas smiles in vivid shades

Nature's color wheel spins in kaleidoscopic days

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Beautiful poem with lovely images.
It was a joy to read.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Kenny N]

I really like this...it may sounds strange, but i really like how you get us to feel the scene, through the use of things like "peppermint air". The way you likened objects in the writing to things we all know in life (i.e. skittles, lucky charms, etc.) really makes for interesting imagery. Awesome piece, great job :)

[Norma M Sutton]

I think it is beautiful. It makes me want to pull out a box of undyed wool and create these colors

[Brandon S. Whitten]

A brilliant and beautiful return to innocence. Splendid read and write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. The good description gave life to the artwork. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[realmwriter]

It's a rainbow laid out in words. Very well done...! I like it...!

[Ruth]

What I think is that this blew me away! lol
As always, I am blessed to have read you love xoxo

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

colorful and fun, thank you for this one.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is so yummy and pleasantly childish lol...it made me crack a smile :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome