If Only Her Heart Was Visible

The heart needs to see what the eyes already do!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Time wasted on fake love and romance

Heart blind-sided from what the eyes already see

Energy spent trying to fill in the signification

Smiles drip from a sad face like raindrops

 

Whispering words of love parade deep in her subconscious,

longing to be reborn into feelings of emotions

Substruction of her heart is losing foundation

Pain presses deep inside

 

Her once perfect world tilts upside down

Truth spills into prisms of light

Perfumed collar breathes another woman

Lipstick kiss on cheek smears affair

 

Cold silken sheets accomodate only her

Frozen memories of lover's nights stir life long ago

Flattery seep from lying lips

His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked

 

If only her heart was visible it could see the truth like

her eyes already do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Its a good poem overall but there were spelling/gramer errors and I would have put it close to the picture and etc but it was pretty nontheless and I think if you try to edit it it would be just lovely

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for your honest review! i have r.eraead and found I hope all the grammer errors, but I could not find any misspelled words

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

reborned should be reborn; its already past tense

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol no prob

[KAREN]

Stunning piece of work! The pain is felt with deep emotion, and the words gives visions of images that the reader can see.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you very much!