If Only Her Heart Was Visible

The heart needs to see what the eyes already do!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Time wasted on fake love and romance

Heart blind-sided from what the eyes already see

Energy spent trying to fill in the signification

Smiles drip from a sad face like raindrops

 

Whispering words of love parade deep in her subconscious,

longing to be reborn into feelings of emotions

Substruction of her heart is losing foundation

Pain presses deep inside

 

Her once perfect world tilts upside down

Truth spills into prisms of light

Perfumed collar breathes another woman

Lipstick kiss on cheek smears affair

 

Cold silken sheets accomodate only her

Frozen memories of lover's nights stir life long ago

Flattery seep from lying lips

His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked

 

If only her heart was visible it could see the truth like

her eyes already do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

So descriptive powerful. Another classic piece you've painted here, with gorgeous imagery about such a relatable topic. I love how deep the whole thing is. It's just beautiful. Thank you.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you very much!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Such a well written poem about a very painful life situation. You did an outstanding job on this poem!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[quinfinn]

i think this is beautiful...it describes perfectly (with stellar imagery) what is known as
blinded and blindsided by love...ouch! i felt every line deeply!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I must say another splendid write from you :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to say what is wasted or not. I wouldn't trade the pain or pleasure away. I like the thoughts to ponder by the poem. Life can lead us down many roads. I believe if we end up in a good place. We did okay. Great poetry. Open the doors to question s that only living a life can answer. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Art Sun]

nice work on this view into a relationship that has fallen ...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

They say love is blind and that is because it does not use eyes... coarse in some cases it is really the glare of lust blinding us.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful, serene write. Nicely done.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!