If Only Her Heart Was Visible

The heart needs to see what the eyes already do!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Time wasted on fake love and romance

Heart blind-sided from what the eyes already see

Energy spent trying to fill in the signification

Smiles drip from a sad face like raindrops

 

Whispering words of love parade deep in her subconscious,

longing to be reborn into feelings of emotions

Substruction of her heart is losing foundation

Pain presses deep inside

 

Her once perfect world tilts upside down

Truth spills into prisms of light

Perfumed collar breathes another woman

Lipstick kiss on cheek smears affair

 

Cold silken sheets accomodate only her

Frozen memories of lover's nights stir life long ago

Flattery seep from lying lips

His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked

 

If only her heart was visible it could see the truth like

her eyes already do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

It sounds like "she" liked a guy , a lot, then he
talked her into a lover`s tryst (LIES) then he
got dressed and left. Sorry !
I think the poem is flowing, beautiful and very well done.
It will be interesting to follow this writer. I sense excitng
and wonderous things to come.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks again for the awesome review!

[Jack...]

Sad, very sad, to hear someones heart break. You have captured an emotion that tests the soul and the mind. Unanswered questions, thoughts of why, feelings of not good enough...the pain, so very sad but so nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Cole Hayley]

Its a really philsophic peice, the picture fits perfetly. Its hard, yet fragile.

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This had so much imagery to it that the true meaning was almost lost to me. And than the meaning of the story hit me and I realized how much feelings were trapped into those words. Truly a great poem.

[Norma M Sutton]

Sad. IMO this is the best line "His deceit leaves her vulnerable and naked"

[closed]

seamless poetic quality that unravels the longings and throes of the human heart^

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely, beautifully written

[Valentine]

Funny how so many people can see the signs and still not believe them..I hate the sneaky ones that leave no signs..kathie

[Mauricio Montoya]

some like to hide thier heart, for fear of trust.
Nice work.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Raven Starhawk]

This invokes a whole segment of power. I am not sure how I can write here how I could identify with this, but has moved me.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!