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In life we part ways with so many on our journey

we learn much as we step out and step away 

at times we walk alone, by choice

we grow better in times of reflection 

and when our paths join again with others

whether new friends or old

the cycle begins anew 

of learning, sharing

growing

becoming better together through becoming better 

as individuals 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your words are sad because in the Cafe there are such good people, ready to help with writing, ready to make a person's time in here pleasant. BUT, please, don't give up on everyone. Have been here for about fifteen years and come across only a handful of mischief-makers or trolls. But they are nothing people who enjoy causing upsets to make selves feel important. So many others are decent and humble, fun and kind. Believe me, please, there are, Aluppi.

[John Sullivan]

Really good stuff, friend. I hear ya.

[Aluppi Jampur]

It is good to be heard. Thank you, poet.

[John Sullivan]

You're very welcome. Do you mind if I send ya a friend request?

[Aluppi Jampur]

I welcome it.

[John Sullivan]

Thanks, friend

[Miss Sharon]

Awesome write! Filled with truth and wisdom. ~Sharon

[Aluppi Jampur]

Thank you for the view and comment Sharon.

[John the Baptist]

Wise words here. Sometimes we have to go it alone before we can share with others.

[Aluppi Jampur]

Thank you for this comment, poet.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant. Our journeys diverge and come together. Life is full of seasons.

[Aluppi Jampur]

My thanks to you sir for the nice words.

[...Relic...]

We can always learn from past relationships. We might contemplate our mistakes and decide to go about things differently. We might want to think of others more than ourselves. There's always something to learn and grow from.

Well done.

[Aluppi Jampur]

Thank you for understanding my words, dear poet.