Actually song lyrics from a fictional band, Touch of Orange, created for my book
It’s getting harder & harder to wake up everyday, Hit after Hit my heads still in dismay, I can't slip this pain, Driving my thoughts insane, So many wasted years, Uncried tears, Can't quit this stabbing feeling, shiv, It’s getting harder & harder to live. Not feeling the love today Not feeling much today I'm taking bong hits like band aids Rip it quick to feel no pain There's no sunshine through the rain The tears are coming down again Every single day is the same When it feels like you're your only friend Awakening to thoughts of yesterday I wonder how these thoughts transcend With all the madness in the way There never seems to be an end It's been hard to live When there was so much to give Not feeling the love today Not feeling much today I'm taking bong hits like band aids Rip it quick to feel no pain I get nothing back Until I take a whack I lose myself in a world of wonder Flying so high I can feel the thunder And I'm feelin real fine Thoughts and emotion intertwine Until I drift back to where I've been stayin remembering why I was always prayin It's because I've got no more to give There is no end when it's hard to live Not feeling the love today Not feeling much today I'm taking bong hits like band aids Rip it quick to feel no pain
I did not write these lyrics alone. I wrote the refrain and three friends freestyled the lyrics. However, I was given them by my friends to use as I wanted for my book.
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Thank you. My friends have been thrilled with all the positive feedback
11 Years Ago
It's lovely, hard to tell multiple people worked on it.
11 Years Ago
We'll have to do more some day. I have various albums and titles planned, but poetry has never been .. read moreWe'll have to do more some day. I have various albums and titles planned, but poetry has never been my strong point.
sometimes, a bong hit is all we have for our sanity. i prefer the brownie and cookie approach, having lung cancer. a profound and seething write on your part. i thoroughly felt this one.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
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