Floating Head

Something I threw together because I am tired XP

  My head is floating

  In the clouds,

  But my body still

  Remains on the ground.

  My mind is traveling

  Places, beyond space

  And beyond time.

  My brain is slowing

  Down, slipping

  In and out of life.

  Then it ends,

  And I rest in peace. 

Author's Note

Good? Bad? Any mistakes?

Reviews

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

This is good. Keep writing :)

[DearSweetAgony]

Good
I liked it.
Your way of writing reminds me of my way of writing.
I loved the third line the most
My mind is traveling
Places, beyond space
And beyond time.
just beautiful!
Great Job!

[Zack Burton]

I think this is excellent and perfectly short. Usually, I'm not a big fan of short poetry, but this one really caught my attention. Very good.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really interesting and cool!

i like, nope no mistakes that i see...like it

[raindroplove]

its good

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Boundless, fearless and prized, a soul demanding peace and love, I would take care of grammatical error though, sometimes the meaning gets lost in the words of old, well done, good read.