Ocean

The emptiness she feels is deeper than any ocean.
The sadness in her is stronger than any current.
The anxiety hits her harder than the waves crash into the shore.
All she knows is she doesnt want to be here anymore.
So she jumps.
Feeling the wind in her hair and the beating in her chest,
She falls down faster and faster.
This is her fate.
She will finally be free.
She hits the water and sinks down deep.
No longer will she hurt.
She is steady, peaceful; She is free.

Reviews

[nocool]

Free is never found on bent knee
To jump is the easy part
it is found in simplicity

Children dance like shadows in the wall
allegory of the cave is found cold dark halls

It is a fight to bring one's self to a shining light
out of dark rooms
crystal stars and sweet smell
of springs perfume


jumping is no place to be
a warrior's sprint is wild and free
emptiness is the all of you
find that and it will set you free
for someone to love a you
you must first know how important it is to love a me
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Very well done.. you took me with you.

[im_just_me]

Thank you.