Thank You

There is only one tear to cry

Only one life to break

 

She broke mine

A murderer

 

I was left in pieces

Shattered, torn

 

Unforgiving and no turning back

Forever she will regret

 

The day she broke mine

Was the day I change

 

And into this monster I became

She made me like this

 

I shall never forgive

She will never forget

 

The day crimson blood flowed through the river

The day that she left forever

 

"Thank you" I would say

But these words are too late

 

 

Reviews

[CriticalxxAngel]

I really liked your poem it's simple but very meaningful. Good Job!

[Veronica DiMarco]

so dark and revengeful...
i pity those who have wronged us...
they die so much in our writing... :)