my 'favorite' teacher
A Poem by
Shapirta
a poem about my teacher
my 'favorite' teacher
as wide as a bleacher
is quite a screecher,
that meany, teacher
© 2014 Shapirta
Author's Note
what do you think?
Reviews
Someone's got roasted in this one!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Haha! I'm almost eleven, and my teacher is really nice but the head.. .
OH DEAR!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Haha! I'm almost eleven, and my teacher is really nice but the head.. .
OH DEAR!
10 Years Ago
I AM ELEVEN!!! =) let's be freinds!!!! (there i spelling it wrong again, but I'm too lazy to fix it).. read more I AM ELEVEN!!! =) let's be freinds!!!! (there i spelling it wrong again, but I'm too lazy to fix it) +) =)
This one made me laugh. It was cute. Made me think of some of the awful teachers I have had in my past. Thankfully the good teachers are usually more plentiful than the bad.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This one made me laugh. It was cute. Made me think of some of the awful teachers I have had in my past. Thankfully the good teachers are usually more plentiful than the bad.
though its different from what I have expected
but is a small pretty piece
Posted 10 Years Ago
though its different from what I have expected
but is a small pretty piece
Funny! I like how my expectations of the poem were so different from what it really was. I actually thought it was about your favorite teacher. Your tone was good. Good job! :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Funny! I like how my expectations of the poem were so different from what it really was. I actually thought it was about your favorite teacher. Your tone was good. Good job! :)
I had a few of these teachers. Good poem
Posted 10 Years Ago
I had a few of these teachers. Good poem
Cute and funny! I have to say, it's aptly describes my 'fav' teacher too. smart penning.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Cute and funny! I have to say, it's aptly describes my 'fav' teacher too. smart penning.
Short, but I like that it Rhymes.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short, but I like that it Rhymes.
I like the tone of this poem. Short, but nicely done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I like the tone of this poem. Short, but nicely done.
Funny. The writer looks beyond external appearances and behaviors to see the quality of a person's dedication. I like this. Great job.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Funny. The writer looks beyond external appearances and behaviors to see the quality of a person's dedication. I like this. Great job.
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Added on September 17, 2014
Last Updated on September 17, 2014
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Shapirta dude hi!, NY
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i recently turned eleven, and for as long as i can remember, have always loved writing. haha wow. now im 12. time flies..
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