feelings

a poem of feelings- please review

The feelings of my heart

are so full of me

 I might just fall apart,

If I don't let it out immediately

sometimes I feel lonely,

no friends around to help,

my diary,  my only

  you may just heard me yelp

sometimes I feel sad,

depressed, and full of despair,

all I need is my writing pad,

and my sadness goes elsewhere.

sometimes I feel happy

sun shining down on my face,

 around me, trees grow quite sappy,

everything, I embrace

Author's Note

tell me what you think of this poem

Reviews

[Tricia Pattinson]

Fun and beautifully composed. Keep it up!

[Shapirta]

thanks for reviewing! =)

[Sindu]

So aptly described.. Writing cures it for a while.
I do this too. Be happy. Be sad. People fade but this.. never does.
Great job!

[Martin28]

I liked the imagery of the poem a lot! I believe you caught the sense of isolation very well. To me as a reader, I enjoyed how ever stanza encompassed a new side to the writer's mind set. Very lyrical. Great job!

[Shapirta]

thanks a lot! my favorite thing i wrote here was 'the silver necklace'. can you do me a huge favor and review it? (and read it, lol) thanks!

[Martin28]

No problem :D

[Shapirta]

thanks so much! i am also open to any constructive criticism, on the story!

[b4i8islept]

I can certainly relate. Very nice poem.

[Shapirta]

thanks, uh... I can't really pronounce your name =)

[b4i8islept]

Before I ate I slept but you can call me Roger :)

[Shapirta]

okay! sounds good, Roger!