pizza

a haiku on pizza please review and tell me what you think

you have fresh pizza

crispy, delicious, cheesy,

give me some right now!

Author's Note

please review! i want to know what you think!

Reviews

[Tricia Pattinson]

LOL. Did the pizza shop post this in their window? You might suggest they do to advertize your awesome skill!

[Baby Ricochet]

Well, I want pizza now,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Shapirta]

lol. my friends emailed me a pic of her eating pizza which inspired me to write this lol. we all have that feeling

[Kieta!]

Hahaha :D This is awesome! Three lines of writing, and now I'm craving pizza!! :D Great job!!! :)

[Shapirta]

THANKS!!! =)

[Sindu]

haha! Too early in the morning to crave it..
Share with me when you have some? :)

[Rich13White]

Haha...a slice here also...

[Shapirta]

willing to, if only i was the one with the pizza!

[Ashira Macy]

Haha I love this! I think it would actually be classified as a Senryu (same format as a Haiku, but Haikus are about nature exclusively.) I have written a Senryu on pizza as well ironically, but it wasn't as enthusiastic because I work at a pizza place. Great job on this my friend!

[Shapirta]

you work at a pizza place? which one?