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Why cant ppl see the pain

but they point fingers and blame

but they are the same

hating induvduales

Beacuse they are scared

for we don't care

we are diffrent and they are the same

Author's Note

okay so it need a name. Any ideas? just tell them to me mad you might see it as the title!!

Reviews

[Queen Jummarrium]

that was a very good poem. you express pain and sadness so well but it was difficult to read lies 3-5 the color was a bit to light you might want to change that over all i liked it and the title should be something like stupid people or i hate people but i don't really know the poem is your and there for only you know what the true title should be. well see ya later and quit distorting my profile it's annoying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

good but very short...

[Aekmy]

The lines were a tad bit lighter than needed. I had to highlight them just to read it, other than that and a few spelling errors you did lovely! :DDDD

Keep writing.

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
This one is such a wonderful piece indeed !!!
Very nice !!!