Mine Before Hers

Mine Before Hers

A Poem by Call me Jane
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not much to say :)

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He Was mine

Then she came along

Not his girl friend but my firend

she took him from me

I tryed to get him back

he got closer to her

he pulled away from 

me

geting closer to her 

leving me out

picking her pretty flowers

protecting her

oh i hope he will be mine once agin

© 2008 Call me Jane


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Short sweet and well written, a pleasure to read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That sucks when that happens! Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one, it has a very nice title to it, it says so much! :) Good Job! And thanks for the review!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 4, 2008

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Call me Jane
Call me Jane

Ohio is For Lovers, MN



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i wanna runaway runaway from my messed up life from the ppl that hurt me the ones who dont care what happens to me i wanna run from those who have wronged me the ones that hate destroy me a.. more..

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A Poem by Call me Jane