A letter to you.

A letter to you.

A Story by Ash.

Hello, there. You are unaware of who I am but I know every detail about you. No, I am not your stalker or your slave. I am merely a girl who has found someone she connects with. You may or may not notice me, seeing as I sit in the shadows, reading and observing.

We have communicated through simple glances and a few exhanged words, but nothing more. Your eyes express pain and confusion, and it greatly bothers me. Self-doubt and anxiety seems to flow through every part of your body, and you remind me of myself.

I have tried to dismiss you from my thoughts, but I have no luck. My curious mind finds you intriguing, and I must get to know you. I beg and plead that you will not find me repulsive or odd for expressing my feelings. Dear, you must be understanding, for I have never felt such emotions in my life.
Though I depart in a month, I will carry you along with me. People like you and I, we don't just separate and grow apart, we only grow closer. I hope you allow this bond to strengthen, dear.

 

With much love and adoration,

Ashton

© 2008 Ash.


Author's Note

Ash.
This is my pathetic attempt at writing to someone.
Please, do not be too harsh.

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It's interesting. I've written goodbye letters similar to this and it is not easy. The only error I spotted was the use of the comma after "for" in the ninth line; it's not necessary. Other than that, a fine piece�

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Ash.

Williamstown, WV



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