"Does love ever have last word?"

"Does love ever have last word?"

A Poem by Andreea Ciocan
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one expirience of mine...hope u enjoy it with me

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   ....It started some years ago....Seems to be from beggining a clasical and true love story...Was a sunny day of 15 octuber...

       Yesterday i called my lovely old friend Nikol to invite her for a party to one new friend of mine...She accept it, maybe coz she wanna it to remember old times togheter...This my new friend had a crush on me, and i think the party was a reson to came more closer , i can't say that i didnt like the ideea that someone likeing me, so i reply some feelings, even if there was something missing...So it's came the day for wich i prepare a lot,( normal no?, i should let a good impresion about me, who knows what bring's future, most of all to the party will come people wich i never saw before, except Nikol and a commun friend ). So i made a cake, i knew is he's birthday , even the reason of party wasnt this, so i wanna it to surprise him, and i had right, was a big surprise for him, like he told me :"Dee, thanks a lot, never in my life i get such nice surprise, and most of all a cake! I love u for this more!" and defenetlly he gave me a big hug,(check point, one white ball for me)...

    We are all waiting for Ady to came and pick up us, as he plane we'll go to his best friends house(John). He lives not to far from city, a nice place with small mountins, there will be the party till morning. Here came John with his car and a lady next to him, he get down from car, first impresion..."is this guy married or why he look so tierd and stuff of this stupid life?"... Then come more cars, we separete...i gone in John cars, that lady told us :"the girls come with us! who knows, i have two boys, maybe i will get one for John"....(yeh now i know he is not married...)...We reach...i'm trying to make friends...Dinner time!...only one problem Ady dont know to prepare the meat for barbeque,so as none know i offer to do it...(2nd white ball for me)...Finally everybody finnish to eat, some of them still eating, and some started to dance and drink, so, me and two other girls we try to clean a lil bit the kitchen, getting prepared for danceing...all this time Ady was observing me, i saw him talking to his best friend about me, and latter he present me to John,( i knew his name is John but till that time we didnt say a word one to other, even he was watching me all this time) during the presentation Ady comment to John that i am a verry good girl, he is sure there doesent exist another one like me, good cook, good friend, good looking, verry lovely, and dedicate to friends, all this make John to have a strange look, he was crossing me with his view from up side down, then he give his hand saying : "- Nice to meet u, i am John !..."..."- yeh nice to meet u too, i know u r John...I am Dee !..."and then i continuu to do my work there...after some time me, John,Nikol and some others we was laying down in a sofa, with a bottle of wine, we start to talk nonsense, and drinking all from same botlle, we wasnt drunk, more acting like...John didnt drink , me too, he just invite other to do...then i take Nikol with me, i want it to dance, as we was use to doing in highschool, so we make show,...everybody was danceing and this is good...john was staying apart, but we bring him into our circle and he enjoyed,then i dont know how, i even remember,only that me and John we was still danceing togheter after a long time...(What should be this? love at first sight?...no i dont think so...) I just remember Ady's face, he looked sad, i was so sorry for him...anyway there was a lot's of girls to choose, he defenetlly find one, better then me...

      That night looked to be lucky for me as i souposed , who know's what brings future,so me and John we was still toghether anymoment of that night, talkin, talkin..., talkin...like we knew each other since beggining of world..., he had a different way to talk to me of others guys, he looked more clasical then "new age",... we didnt knew to much about each other but we knew all, we didnt have things in commun, but we had commun things, that night was so calm but so agitated, the moon was our side, was an romantic night...(does this night ends now or never?...maybe never in our hearts...but in our temporal time ,yes, was finnished once everybody gone to his place, and the moon too..)

to be continued....

© 2008 Andreea Ciocan


Author's Note

Andreea Ciocan
ignore pls grammar problems, i not english native

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