Whenever

This is a poem I wrote a long time ago, while I was pining after a cold-hearted boy.

Whenever I look at him,

My heart flutters.

Whenever he sees me,

He makes my heart fly.

Whenever he speaks,

My ears feel pleasant.

Whenever I speak to him,

My heart's in the sky.

 

Whenever he's angry,

I cry.

Whenever he ignores me,

I die.

Whenever he's away,

And we cannot speak,

I scream

And I miss him inside.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think of it.

Reviews

[lauren emily]

Wonderful poem..emotional and pure. It makes you feel sorry for the narrator..
Great job

[Last Lying Look]

Aw. I know just what you mean in this poem. I've felt this way before.
It's not a bad poem. But not my favorite either. Needs a little something.
Good work though.