Nightmares

Things going downhill

I see you
You don’t seem to notice me
I call out to you
My voice falls silent
You start to walk away
I try to follow, but my legs don’t work
I call out again
Again...nothing
I drag myself along
Pulling, struggling
I look up again, you are but a dot on the horizon
I watch helplessly
As you walk out of my life

Author's Note

meant to be ambiguous

Reviews

[Kitsune-]

Its good, i like it.

This is good work, but it is a little bland, not the meaning of it- that's great, the idea of people leaving you in your dreams terrifies me personally! But a little more description would be great, love the repitition of again as well :) good write, well done xx

[X]

this is a good piece of work darling.
i like it but i think you could add more detail.
i'm not saying it needs to be longer, just add more of the thoughts that are going on in the situation and then i think it'd be even greater.
nice job.
xoxo.
monica. =]

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

They say breaking up is hard to do. Good write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[phantom]

Interesting poem really good poem it brings back memories of my best friend who moved away havent heard from him since tried to shut them up but u've just brought them back out.