Intro for a storyA Story by BRITNEY SPEARS luverIt's just an introduction, but I'm thinking of editing. I need help, though. I could use some constructive criticism!! :) Thanks"I couldn’t breathe. Mom was tightening the metal cord around my neck. Tighter…harder…I felt a little dizzy.
He nods. "So. You were about to be killed, just like 8 months ago, but this time you did die? Or what?" I go deep into thought. "Well, the dream." I sigh. "The dream didn't ever finish. It just kept stopping around there." Mr. Wyler jots down a few nots on his notebook. "Yes. Kelly, did you notice that there was another detail in this dream?" I pry my eyes away from the sunlight that filtered through the dirty window and stared innocently at the man before me. "Huh?" © 2009 BRITNEY SPEARS luverAuthor's Note
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