Tick tock

I wait, I wait

To the ticking of the clock

O the noise that I hate

tick tock, tick tock

I watch the page endlessly,

waiting for reviews

I watch the daylight falter

hoping for good news

I wait, I wait

This makes me want to pout

I think this is my fate

So peace, I'm out

Author's Note

Please review my other writing, "Attack of Skandia"

Reviews

[David Lewis Paget]

Not bad, the above, but as to reviews, I was a member of WC for over a year before I began to receive steady reviews. You need to build up a friendship base first, it won't happen overnight. Also, some people review stories, some novels, some poetry, rarely all together. I never review prose works myself, only rhymed verse, too time consuming. Be patient.

[ThinkingOfAnAlias]

Thanks for the advice. I'm going to join groups to hopefully get more reviews.

[Enid Blake]

Lol - don't give up!
I sense irritation in your poem.

[ThinkingOfAnAlias]

Thanks for reviewing me. You're my first review and yes i'm irritated. i need someone to review my story and tell me if its good or not.