Thursdays

The first time I fell in love, it was with a boy one year older than myself. My heart remained captured for five true years, though i did not even know what kind of person he was.

I never thought I'd fall in love,

at least not so deeply

My only wish is you would fall in with me

just as steeply

 

You knowing how i feel

might change everything.

 

For better I can only dream

I know we make the perfect team.

Feeling awkward's now my middle name

I wonder if you feel the same.

 

I know you love me too,

who told me I can't tell you,

though i still fear it isn't true.

 

 

Author's Note

For you, dear reader, it will be quitely near impossible to grasp every last instance, every drop of emotion that flew from my heart when composing this. It is the msot beautiful thing I have ever written, for its simplicity speaks volumes more that each word alone. Simply, here lies my fifth grade heart.

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is such a sweet poem for a poetry album, for girls. I enjoyed it lightness of being.

[ANNA]

Yes! Its the most beautiful thing I have read! and I feel that my heart is painfully happy to know that I can relate to this so much. Wow I feel a tear in my eyes, but you replace my sight with your wonderful words! I'm blessed for reading this.. Thank you

Anna

[darkgurl]

Such a beautiful write this is, well written

[Michelle]

a sweet write. May the love be returned.

Michelle