Tears

the poem speaks for itself

the tears that trikle down your face,
are picture perfect full of grace,

a beeded glow that shimers in the light.
abscuring darkness in the night.


they flow with elegance and delight.
leaving nothing but a fleeting sense of flight.

they stream a thousand miles across my lips.
yet travel only seconds as they find my kiss.

 

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Your unique style it's so smooth every word it's amazing..
I was surfing the site and I find you...thanks... this is a good poem.. I love it!

[Aliza]

oh my gosh! this is beautiful...
i love the couplets too!
such a beautiful explanation of a simple thing

[poetic-raven2012]

Beautiful! I love the couplets, and this has really good flow
=)

[Anita B Jacques]

Very nice, smooth and easy flow as the tears, I will not see tears in my old ways anymore. Great write.
God Bless

Anita

[Wolfwind Words]

I think this was really beautiful. What came across to me was how one will stand by another's side even during the times of tears. How with each tear kissed away only shows love's brightness even more.

I also see in this piece how each tear is filled with many words, far to many to be spoken in full. How tears can speak volumes if we just take the time to listen.

Just what I saw in it.

Wonderfully Crafted!
Aaron Maycroft