Torn

Buy this heart with your soul of hate
Feel the blood discriminate
Find the fire deep inside
Everyone soon will die~!

Everything inside me (crumbling into pieces)
Crawling inside me (following the blood flow)
Everyones aginst me (liquor and love lost)
Razorblade wounds will never heal~!

Youve ripped out my heart
Youve torn up my soul
You left me time and time again
Dont come back anymore

You tell me youre sorry,
You say its your fault
You say youll never leave again
Youre telling everyone

Buy this heart with your soul of hate
Feel the blood discriminate
Find the fire deep inside
Everyone soon will die~!

And If I had my choice Id never let you go.

I had a choice to never let you go...

Author's Note

Idk, Its kinda short...
What do you think?

Reviews

[Jacqueline]

I like it because it is short.
I think it gets the emotion across without making it too tedious.
Well done.
I like it :]

[anthony lopez]

i love it! great wording!

[poetic-raven2012]

I think this is short, but it's really good, and quality is better than quantity.
=)
I like how you repeat the first part near the end.
~~Jenn~~

[nostal]

Nice.