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I was having a bad day again. I just wanted to get some sleep. I lay down on my bed and closed my eyes. I began to dream of a beautiful place. Far away. I was awoken by a noise. I looked around to realize i was in a forest, it was foggy, moist, cold. I got up and walked around. Were was I? Far away i saw a silhouette. A man with a knife. I began to run, run more and more. Through the trees, i felt the moist leaves under my bare feet. My breathing became ragged. I stopped and hid behind a tree. Carefully, i listened. I heard its footsteps.

"Suuusy" it breathed, "You can't hide from me!"

Just then a knife hit the side of the tree, inches away from my face. I screamed and ran. I needed to get away from this monster. Tears began to flow down my face. I ran into a field. I looked around and in the center, was a guillotine. Blood on the blade. I backed up slowly. Fear was rising in my heart. The air got colder and colder the more and more i stepped back. Suddenly i ran into something. But it didnt feel like something hard.... more like something.... liquidy? I turned around and saw the shape of a tall man with a hat. But i couldnt see any of its features. Only blackness. I screamed and tried to run more.

"YOU CAN'T HIDE FROM ME!" it shouted again.

I ran, more and more between the trees. More and more tears began flowing down my face. How could this happen? What was going on? I stopped. Around me were a circle of trees. Suddenly they all caught on fire. i screamed. The shadow passed through the  flames, like nothing.

"Hahaha" it said, i could hear the evil in its voice.

I tried to get away but i couldnt.

"You cant hide from me" i whispered.

It raised it's hand with the knife and i screamed.

TO BE CONTINUED....

Author's Note

I kinda came up with like, a plan for a story i wanna write. What do you think?

Reviews

[OT]

I like it! you could turn it into like a nightmare on elm street type thing, where dreams aren't safe!!

[halflives]

I think you should continue this, make it a book or something. It would make a very interesting read. And the whispering was classic horror; excellente. I think you should write more horror flickies.

[Phoenix Rising]

I like it, I cannot wait to see where you go with this story.. I agree with the statements below…but either way you have me intrigued.

[Brian W. Hastings]

I agree with lady Erin........the I whisper would be a great twist. ohterwise a great idea. Keep writing.

[Sydney.]

Whoa,whoa i got a little confused at the end,you wrote,"you can't hide from me" i whispered, did you mean IT whispered? if you didn't then thats some real creepy stuff and i like it better that way. good job,i wanna read more

[how.girls.get.clean]

oohh scary! gave me chills! please continue!!