Love In The Rave

We meetin' at the club

Drinkin' more and more

Chugging those whiskey shots

Mmm so good.

We be dancing all around

When you walked up to me

We both glowin' in the dark.

Hats, Cloths, and skin

All glowin'

We began to dance

We dance in ways we shouldnt

A rave just for us teenagers.

No drugs just music and liquor

We be dancing in ways we shouldnt

You put your body against mine

And we dance

Dancing to the beat of Daddy Yankee.

Oh how i love mexico

I spot Mario. Fily and Rene. 

I know their jelouse

But tonight its just you and me

Me and Jose <3

We fallin' in love at the rave

no parents around to day no

We party all f*****g night!

Everyone parties tonight

I can see everyone lookin' at us

but we dont care

Were partying tonight

Tonight is for me and you <3

We dancin tonight

Cause tonight is just me and you

Reviews

[OT]

cute! reminds me of younger years at the under 16 discos haha but it has some depth to it as well!! a sweet young love! nice!!

[SimplyDisastrous]

This is cute...but also intense, if that makes sense. I'm liking the rhyme scheme towards the ending, very creative. I also like how you paint the scene of a perfect night at the club in the readers head. Good job. [: