Enough

Enough

A Poem by Escape My Fate

Enough!
Enough is enough!
I wont take peoples crap anymore
I wont sit and listen to peoples insults

Enough! 
Enough is enough!
I won't keep all my secrets locked up
I wont tell myself not to tell

Enough!
Enough is enough!
I wont let my family treat me like scum
I wont sit there and let them ignore me no more

Enough!
Enough is enough!
I wont sit back and let these thoughts haunt me no more
I wont let myself go insane

Enough!
Enough is enough!
I wont sit back and let myself die
I wont let that happen

Enough!
Enough is enough!
I will seek help
I will get better

Enough.

© 2010 Escape My Fate


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this is a wonderfully/powerful emotional poem :)
(superb)

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love your emotion in this, it is so powerful! thanks for sharing! 100/100 for sure!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved the emotion in this!! It made me think about my life and how I want to get rid of everything bad in it as well. I really thought you did a fabulous job getting this out. People should follow it as well. And as you say enough is enough! It was a deep poem. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh my gosh, I actually REALLY like that, so cool, I loved the way you started each stanza with the same lines, genius work! This incredibly powerful, nicely worded and very well presented, I loved it! Very deep and emotional, I really loved the line "I won't sit back and let myself die" just wicked, to me that's the line that stands out the most - it's brilliant! Keep up the good work mortal!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Outstanding! I totally agree with you on this.
I loved the begining of this especially.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome write! I'm glad you are putting your foot down to certain things: people's insults, your family treating you the way they do...i just say...dont' care about what anyone thinks. Just follow your own path, whether other people like it or not, just prove them wrong. That's all you can really do. And I also really liked the emotion and repitiion of "Enough! Enough is enough!" makes the poem flow nicely :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good morning, Earthling!
Nice to see you wake up.

This is a good poem, words that are often said, and seldom used.
Oh, and the help you speak of.....
It is not necessary to seek help, you are help, when you have reached the plains of Kyros.
(it's a greek word, googleit.)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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