True Love

You cuddled up against me

And your arms wrapped around me

I felt the heat of your body, against mine

I kissed you for so long,

I love you for calling me Beautiful,

For admitting to your friends that your in love <3

I love you for always letting me cry on you

I love you for always being their for me

We were truly meant to be

I don't care that im in Colorado,

And your in California,

Soon we'll be together

Sitting on the beach of California

Kissing during the sunset

I cant wait until i can be in your arms, 

And i know were only thirteen,

But i know were meant to be

I love you with all my heart,

And you love me with all of yours. 

I know we'll be happy forever and ever

Because you have never betrayed me,

And i have never betrayed you.

I hope we stay together forever

Because i only have half a heart

And you have the other piece

If we get teared apart, 

We'll both be hurt forever

I love you Ryan Sifers.

Reviews

[deeps]

Ah this is so amazing and ever so beuatiful.
I really enjoyed this lovely piece....

[Karli]

oh this is absolutely beautiful. So much truth, passion, and emotion. it's the relationship everyone dreams of, or at least what I dream of (without the long-distance thing). I really enjoyed this, and I read it many times over. :)

[Zoe Jay]

This is so intimate, it feels familiar to me. It's honest and simple and direct. Overall, this is beautiful. I love the opening. It has an almost Romeo & Juliet classical feel. Very sweet! I innocence of this poem is appealing. One thing I particularly like is that you had the balls to name the object of your affection, love poems are commonly more vague and do not mention a specific person, and this makes it feel all the more personal and direct.

By the way, "teared apart" is "torn apart". :-)

[Rebecca!]

I could feel the emotion in this poem. I Absolutely love the way this is written.

[KAREN]

This was a heart felt written poem, full of emotion! I could feel how much you love this person! Great job!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is so cute. I am so happy you found your true love. It sounds like my situation with the one I love. He lives in Minnesota while I live in Jersey. I hope everything works out for you. Thanks for sharing. :)