Thoughts

Im sitting in the back seat of my sisters car
My mom is behind the streering wheel
My little Sister beside me
My older sister in front
I Plug in my headphones
And turn on my music
I Have my laptop
i open up itunes and automaticly go to my "ETF" playlist
I listen to "Theres no Sympathy for The Dead"
I listen to the lyrics
And try to keep my tears in
I hear these lyrics
And repeat them over and over in my head
"Finger on the trigger"
I let a small tear roll down my cheek
I thought to myself
I am suicidle
I know i should seek help
But i know i dont want to
Im obssesed with naruto Shippoden
My favorite charecter is Gaara.
I cry for the littlest thing
I'm very sensative
I dont like being picked on
I want to go to heaven
I got through pain no one would even be able to understand
I'm scared to sleep,
Go to school,
Or even have a social life.
im scared to look out my window
this is Me

Author's Note

Lost of spelling and Grammer, i know,
please review

Reviews

[KAREN]

I think if you wrote this from your heart your writing is what you want it to be! I could feel your pain when I read this, and that's what you want from readers is to feell what you have written!!

[smalltownsympathies]

Okay, so I know you're looking for lots of reviews-perhaps people saying good work, nice job, yadayada. I will commend you for trying to work through your emotions. They're tough, I personally am able to understand that. However, your writing..just isn't up to par. You give the literal for everything, you're observing instead of watching, gazing, analyzing. Stop telling me how you feel, what you see, Who you see, where you are, when it's happening, SHOW ME SHOW ME SHOW ME.