Day Dreaming

Day Dreaming

A Poem by Escape My Fate
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A little something i wrote for someone who i love, who lives too far away

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During Class
I close my eyes
I think of how you used to hold me
How you used to lie on my lap
Or me on yours
Your smile is engraved in my mind
Your eyes are engraved on mine
But your words are engraved on my heart
I miss leaning on your chest
I miss you holding me in your arms
I miss looking into your eyes
Why do we have to be pulled apart?
Every time we are,
It hurts us both, deep inside
Ten months away from you
Away from your smile
Your eyes,
Your arms,
Your words.
How do we manage to survive?
I want to stay forever by your side.
I think about it all
Only to be awaken by reality

© 2010 Escape My Fate


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Awesome write i have just shelfed your poem, really heartfelt and touching!
A true lovers feelings.

Posted 13 Years Ago


love love love love it!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww... =/ ten months sounds like forever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. I can definitely relate to this.
Great job!!(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this, probably because I can relate to it. The detail and wording were fantastic

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not much to say,
I relate with this piece so much nowadays

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really love this. Very very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It is kind of sweet. But it's also really sad. She's dreaming about something that's not there. Something she can't have. I have definitely been there.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 23, 2010
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