Hello, this is my story. I am a young woman, who has never had a boyfriend, nor my first kiss.
Hello,
this is my story. I am a young woman, who has never had a boyfriend,
nor my first kiss. I have never had the one. For some people, the 'one
is really important. The one is the person you're really in love with
and plan to marry, have kids, grow old with, and to be with them
forever and ever.
Sometimes, people think they have found the
one, when really they're just a fake. A heart breaker in disguise. And
those who really are the one, well, what can I say? Most people are
always searching for love, whether it's fake or real. People don't
realize who their real one is, because it takes a long time for them to
find it. And sometimes, when people get a fake love, their lives are
changed, sometimes forever. And sometimes...they change back, with a
little help from someone special, who might just turn into be the one;
their one.
Anyway, you must be wondering why I am sitting here
all alone in the rain, crying my eyes out. Well, it has to do with
everything that I just mentioned. I met my one true love, but now I'm
beginning to think if that was really my one true love or not.
Have you eva watched 'The Emperor's New Groove'? Well it's a movie & it starts out with a llama sittin' in the rain, all sad. & he starts talkin to ya & he tells u hes all sad. He tells ya how he got turned in2 a llama.
Well, the reason y imma tellin u about that is 'cuz that's how my story is gonna b like. it starts out in the present, then goes 2 the past, & comes back 2 the present to cont. on from there.
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Ah! okay got it. you starting into the present then rewinding to show how the character ended up in that spot. an I'm assuming that your going to continue the present and follow it out into the end. that's a very popular and cool way to write a book. It intrested me. I think you intro was really good, it draws in a reader and makes the nod, because the narrator is blunt and honest, and alot of people can relate to her. good job on a intresting prologue.
Ah! okay got it. you starting into the present then rewinding to show how the character ended up in that spot. an I'm assuming that your going to continue the present and follow it out into the end. that's a very popular and cool way to write a book. It intrested me. I think you intro was really good, it draws in a reader and makes the nod, because the narrator is blunt and honest, and alot of people can relate to her. good job on a intresting prologue.
Heyy, to whoever is reading my profile right now! Before you continue on, I would just like you to know something important about me and my stories. I am an amateur writer, which means I'm not a profe.. more..