Chapter Two

  "I thought there would be more of you, today," Ryou muttered. He had just finished his shadow destruction spree, but he still had his sword out, just in case anything happened. He flipped his dark blue hair and continued walking. After a while, Ryou decided that since no more shadows were going to appear, he might as well put his sword away. Ryou held his arm horizontally in front of him. Blue, square crystals began to float around his arm. And after a few seconds, his sword had vanished into them.

Author's Note

Please, please, tell me what you think!
Chapters one, two, and three, are short because they just introduce the characters.

Reviews

[Aya]

If you say its a character introduction, so in my opinion you should describe them more, like their age, appearance, not just their magical powers. And I think it can be good if they have different types of power or tools...but its interesting story so far...can't think of a title yet, as not much revealed yet. Only if you want to tell me more in message about whole story you have in your mind. :)
Aya

[Hannah]

Okay. I wasn't wanting to tell about their appearances in their introductions.. which is kinda weird, but of well. I would tell you the story of it, but it's hard for me to do that without giving a lot of stuff away. But I'm very glad you like it so far. Thank you